A new draft...

Here is another rough draft of my music video where I have added some new scenes, such as the opening and closing scenes of the girl, and added text- as I found this was a convention of music videos. I also deleted some scenes that I realised did not look conventional for a music video, and have noted where I need to add and change some more things. Including the font on the video title because I realised this does not look very professional or conventional and have decided to use a better font on my final draft, and a font that my audience can associate with the ancillary texts.